Ok, I am not the expert but I think you have the facial part down but your body movements look stiff. you don't look like you know what to do with your hands. Also it is clear you are talking to the camera and not to a person. You don't pause at point were there could be a retort, it looks like an arguement I would have with Alexis, no interest in the other side.
Hey Sophia! This is really good I think:) I like the storyline and how you put a lot of emotion into it:) I think you seem a bit nervous, but trust me I would be much worse than you! I think this is a great monologue:) Nice work!
It was good! I like the emotions that you put into it...the facial expressions are good! I did a piece from Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson once... I think you should look into it! It's a book but I took certain scenes from it and made it into a 5 minute pro. I think you would do really well!
This is a very powerful piece soph. I like the stillness you put into this character because from what I gather she is trying to hold herself together juggling angry, hurt, frustration, and tears. My advice would be to keep playing with the emotional levels. You are doing agreat job and I can't wait to see you perform!
woow this is amazing. I loooved how you put all your movement into that object and the rest came out through your vocals. It made it more powerful for me. Also I could understand you very clearly which was great! Keep it up!
Ok, I am not the expert but I think you have the facial part down but your body movements look stiff. you don't look like you know what to do with your hands. Also it is clear you are talking to the camera and not to a person. You don't pause at point were there could be a retort, it looks like an arguement I would have with Alexis, no interest in the other side.
ReplyDeleteHey Sophia! This is really good I think:) I like the storyline and how you put a lot of emotion into it:) I think you seem a bit nervous, but trust me I would be much worse than you! I think this is a great monologue:) Nice work!
ReplyDeleteIt was good! I like the emotions that you put into it...the facial expressions are good!
ReplyDeleteI did a piece from Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson once... I think you should look into it! It's a book but I took certain scenes from it and made it into a 5 minute pro. I think you would do really well!
This is a very powerful piece soph. I like the stillness you put into this character because from what I gather she is trying to hold herself together juggling angry, hurt, frustration, and tears. My advice would be to keep playing with the emotional levels. You are doing agreat job and I can't wait to see you perform!
ReplyDeletewoow this is amazing. I loooved how you put all your movement into that object and the rest came out through your vocals. It made it more powerful for me. Also I could understand you very clearly which was great! Keep it up!
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